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You killed me
Without difficulty,
But I didn't forget

All this pain
When follows the death,
An ocean of tears.

I believed in you,
By your appearance ;
I though I will follow your way.

You decided differently.
Your violence came
And I left rapidly.

[One word.
One speech.
One discussion.
(One answer.)
One quarrel.
One blow.
Ten blows.
Hundred blows.
But only one death.
That's all.]


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Tu m'as tuée,
Sans peine,
Mais je n'ai pas oublié

Toute cette douleur
Où s'ensuit la mort.
Un océan de pleurs.

J'avais cru en toi,
A ton apparence ;
Je pensais suivre ta voie.

Tu en as décidé autrement.
Ta violence s'est abattue,
Et je suis partie rapidement.

[Un mot.
Une parole.
Une discussion.
(Une réponse.)
Une dispute.
Un coup.
Dix coups.
Cent coups.
Mais qu'une seule mort.
C'est tout.]
©2008-2009 ~Feiti
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Author's Comments

[I don't know if I should put it in mature content]

NOTE : I didn't and I don't live this situation ; on the contrary, I am in the happiness. But, some persons haven't got this luck. One though for them.

NOTE BIS : The original version is in french ;)

comments appreciated ;)

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:iconzenyatta:
It is even more beautiful in french!
Katta

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:iconfeiti:
oui, je suis française donc j'écris d'abord en français. je traduit seulement pour les besoins de DeviantArt ^^

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yes, i am french so i write firstly in french. i translate only for the needs of DeviantArt ^^

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:icon2bfree4ever:
I really love this piece very much. Even through translation it is very poignant....powerful!

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:iconfeiti:
In french there is rhymes and some nuances in the words. but I try to give the same strenght in the translation ;)

thank you :hug:

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:iconhermaphroditos:
Violence est un mot qui frappe fort, est quelque chose qui fait trop mal...

Qu'elle soit subie ou infligée par nos propres soins...

:tears:

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